I remember grammar lessons at junior school but not in great detail.
I usually know when a sentence is badly structured
but it is a rare moment when I can actually explain "why" it sounds
so wrong.
Basically all grammar makes for clear communication.
Commas are necessary to avoid confusion
in a long sentence. My nearest and dearest often runs two separate sentences
together, as in "She sleeps soundly, he lies awake and reads." This
is a comma splice and Emma Darwin describes it perfectly:
"When two grammatically complete sentences,
which really need a full stop between them, are separated by a mere comma, the
grammar and syntax of the first sentence lead to the finish, but the comma
isn't a firm enough stop. So the first sentence seems to tumble on, over the
break, and land on the beginning of the second – which then doesn't get to
launch properly. The paragraph as a whole feels sloppy and incoherent, as
reading aloud will reveal, even if your eye didn't spot it.”
"She sleeps soundly; he lies awake and
reads."
In this case a simple colon provides the slight
pause required to separate two independent but closely connected sentences.
There are lots of other examples, and you can read a clear explanation of the
Comma Splice on the blog: https://emmadarwin.typepad.com/thisitchofwriting/itchy-bite-sized/
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