Saturday, 3 December 2022
Do you think about chapter breaks in novel writing?
I didn’t until I saw this piece on Emma Darwin’s Itchy Bitesized blog and started thinking about what I do.
I write until I think there’s an end of chapter coming up - a point where the story line is about to change. Most scenes come to an end naturally when there is no more to say without repeating what you’ve already said. On the other hand, I have occasionally written a long scene that goes across more than one chapter. I need not say that sometimes I love doing a cliffhanger ending to a chapter!
Usually I have (without looking to check, which is unwise!) a chapter containing two scenes, occasionally more. I prefer not to do this, but occasionally it just works that way. Of course, those scenes will be short.
There might be a change of location necessary, or I want to change the POV and if all the other things concur, then a new chapter is a simple way of achieving both those things.
In a long reading life, I would say chapters in general and particularly in genre fiction are now a lot shorter than they used to be. I can remember reading in bed at night (often under the covers) anxiously waiting for a chapter to end so I could switch off and go to sleep. For me, in my books, chapters average out at between three and four thousand words. When I first began a decade or so ago, they averaged about five thousand, but reading modern books has influenced me without my noticing the change.
Friday, 25 November 2022
The Regency period was very short: nine years between 1811 and 1820, when the madness of King George III made him unfit to rule and his son stepped in as Regent.
The author who made the Regency World her own, or indeed invented that world, wrote stories based upon and around the upper classes, their social lives, carriages and clothes and etiquette. They have been incredibly popular since the 1950s. Her name was Georgette Heyer.
I’ve read one or two and enjoyed them. I’ve wondered if she made up all those phrases – a bag of moonshine, land a facer, in his altitudes
Heyer researched the period extensively and built up a library of a thousand reference books by the time she died. Her notes record things like how much candles cost in 1812 and it seems that authors who came after her used much of her writing as fact. Much of it can be checked today and probably more easily, thanks to Google, than when she did all those years ago.
My concern right now is how much of the language she used was real, and how much did she invent? I must ask the people who celebrate all thing Heyer on Twitter accounts such as the ones below. They may have the answer.
@georgettedaily Twitter account.@HeyerSociety
“She decided that her wisest course would be to put him out of her mind. After reaching this conclusion she lay thinking about him until at last she fell asleep.”
Friday, 18 November 2022
My character (work-in-progress character, not me!) has to change from a sort of wild child/tomboy to a young Regency lady and I am pondering how best to do that.
I need to show her emotional and psychological changes and ensure the readers sees how she reacts differently to her new world.
Describing her thoughts could get boring unless I also manage to show how she sets about getting what she needs or wants. There should be a chain that connects how she begins to where she realises something she didn't know before or reaches a point where she does something she wouldn't have done before. If I can include some physical activity while she thinks, that would be good.
She should change in appearance as well as behaviour and I must remember it won’t happen overnight. She could be retrospective at one point, in which she would point up the change she is undergoing.
Her character's voice could be really strong in this sort of piece. If she does one thing and the reader would most likely choose another way of doing it, then Lizzy should begin to feel real to the reader
Friday, 11 November 2022
I think I’ve reached that place that writers call a saggy middle. I understand it is a perennial problem. My characters have done so well, and fought all obstacles, but now – where do they go from here?
Stakes (in story telling at least) are those things that keep a reader reading. Without them, then the story sags and loses momentum.
A story starts with a challenge to a characters' ideas and plans. They are forced into new directions. But the character needs ever new challenges. Words like Then - but - therefore - but - then - but - therefore - but..."come to mind.
If you have
more than one strand or thread, then they need to interweave in an interesting
way. Each time you switch from one strand to another, the
emotional involvement in one thread, and needs to pick up rather quickly on another.
This can slow
reading to a crawl. What? Who is this? What happened to the other person?
Find a place
a breather is
sort of welcome but also promises Things are going to get Hairy when
you turn the Page.
The big turning point needs to have things change for ever. In Pride and Prejudice Mr Darcy's first proposal to Elizabeth is such a turning point: she is offered a splendid marriage which will help both her and her sisters and she turns it down. Why?
Elizabeth finds herself at the crux or the midpoint, where the theme, present in the story right from the beginning, is tested. She made her decision and may well rue it. The very end of the story is where it is finally resolved.
Saturday, 5 November 2022
I discovered a description of it this morning and laughed quietly to myself, for I have been trying to break the habit in my own writing for about a year now.
John Gardner describes “filtering” this way:
The more straightforward, physical filter-words like "saw", "noticed", "looked round" "watched" "observed" are the first ones to look for, and then you can chase down phrases like "I remembered that", "she wondered if", "they decided that", "we considered whether" "he thought about", "He thought back to when", "to her it seemed as if" and if you think of more, follow them, too. You may be able to take out a great many of them and thus improve your writing. I know it improves mine!
Saturday, 29 October 2022
People talk of Gothic novels - aka Northanger Abbey – but what is a gothic setting? Dracula’s castle is gothic because it helps invoke gothic themes. Take architecture, add in claustrophobia and creeping dread, toss in distance from civilisation, a prison-like atmosphere and you are almost there.
Old places, and isolated wilderness helps to set the scene. Almost any castle will do, especially if it is partially ruined and has a dungeon or better yet – a locked door. How about an ancient mansion, a hunting lodge, or dilapidated chateau? There are plenty of ruined cottages scattered about the norther landscape.
Historical fiction is based in reality. In Gothic horror, magic and monsters and things that go bump in the night might be real.
In a Gothic horror, the doll would be the ghost of a horribly murdered girl that now possesses the doll.
In historical fiction ghosts aren’t real and there will usually be a protagonist driven mad by the nasty doll shunted around by her wicked uncle.
I like writing about the Viking Age which tends to be action-packed and practical. But I am beginning to think along the lines of a chieftain’s hall in the middle of nowhere, with a murderer who stalks the corridors at night, leaving gruesome trophies behind!
Yes, I did read Beowulf at uni!
But add in dread, and snow them in over a brutal winter as they are picked off one by one…
Friday, 21 October 2022
Every now and then I flick through the blogs of other writers and pick up some hints and tips to help me on my way. Today I learned that writing the opening line before you’ve finished the book is a waste of time.
I read on and found a first chapter should:
1. Introduce the Main Character.
2. Make us Want to Spend Time with that Character
3. Create an atmosphere from page 1
4. Hint at the Theme
5. Tell Us Where We Are. Home for geriatrics or Chatham House in 1832.
6. We need some conflict on page 1 but the major inciting incident can wait a little
7. What does Your Protagonist Want; one major goal (the main story arc) and a goal for each chapter. Great if you get both in chapter 1.
8. We need Major Characters with dialogue
As Anne R. Allen suggests at the end of her post, the urge to check my first chapter against this list is strong. My Regency heroine is escaping a mean guardian, runs into trouble and is rescued by a handsome young man all in chapter one. But do I have a theme? What does my heroine want, apart from escaping? I think she’s likeable (but I would, wouldn’t I?) but will readers find her entertaining?
All I can do is carry on to the end and then – only then – redesign the first chapter if I feel the need.
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