There are several things that must contribute to this, but one of the most important is to
Define Conflict. Who drives or motivates the scene? What does he want? Does he get it? if not, what stops him? Can he change this?
Has the scene been well set? Do we (the reader) know the value the character puts on the object he is trying to achieve? Will it change his life? Or merely make him more comfortable? Is it worthy?
Throughout the scene keep checking what the character seems to be doing and what he is actually doing.
Note the closing of the scene. What has changed? There must be something that has changed.
The reader should be able to locate the turning point - where action becomes a reaction, and the shape or the pattern of events will change.
It sounds easy enough. Now to go to my work in progress and check.....
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