tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2324257133568010275.post8765302336219388481..comments2024-03-27T10:00:32.637+00:00Comments on JEN BLACK: Crash and burnJen Blackhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12628305777383099281noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2324257133568010275.post-3493742818035375682010-06-03T08:39:08.840+01:002010-06-03T08:39:08.840+01:00Well, we'll soon have the truth because I'...Well, we'll soon have the truth because I'm sending it out now - while still tinkering, of course!Jen Blackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12628305777383099281noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2324257133568010275.post-30359998910041867412010-06-03T01:26:26.613+01:002010-06-03T01:26:26.613+01:00I agree. First pages can be troublesome!I agree. First pages can be troublesome!AnneMarie Brearhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12913093174855808979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2324257133568010275.post-53084129030024968932010-06-02T15:51:09.900+01:002010-06-02T15:51:09.900+01:00I'm rewriting now, and my first pages make me ...I'm rewriting now, and my first pages make me feel so insecure. <br />Just stop fidgeting with yours, I'm sure it's fine.Sarah Callejohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00170538674915115980noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2324257133568010275.post-10735331868192162402010-06-02T11:08:49.945+01:002010-06-02T11:08:49.945+01:00Jen, if you are talking about 'Matho's Sto...Jen, if you are talking about 'Matho's Story', I don't think you have to worry. That one drew me in right from the beginning. And I know you have revised it since then! If I were an agent, I wouldn't toss that one aside.Anita Davisonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13068890701803582595noreply@blogger.com